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Why the Media Must Be Destroyed


Since the birth of America our media has had a huge influence on our information that keeps us informed. The media itself has also created a biased opinion based on what it believes while other people seem to agree on the media鈥檚 opinion which is backed up fabricated facts and completely lies. They follow anything they choose to and we have been addicted to the fallacy of unnecessary information. Until the media is destroyed we will not be free from knowing the actual truth.


The people in this country have been given force fed lies by the media that has and is still getting paid billions by corporations in order to make up these stories that is built on lies and biasness. The media runs by the greed of money and they keep a majority of us to believe there lies as well as the ignorant views of stories that they may cover. They dictate which one becomes president by giving a huge amount of media coverage to that person while giving the other one of a hundred percent to the remaining or person. Our controlling media also makes up polls about the approval rating of the people running for president in which it could very well be overdramatic. A good case of this would be sixty five percent approve of Michelle Bachman and zero percent approve of Ron Paul.


When people protest corporations using their basic rights the media makes them look crazy out of touch with reality. It makes it impossible for their voices to be heard and for any change to actually happen. The media also tends to over exaggerate stories in which have no importance of what is actually going on around the world. When five people die in a category one hurricane heading towards Washington D.C. it is a national tragedy however when five thousand people die in an earthquake in India it is viewed as nothing by the media and therefore is no coverage given on events like this but rather events that gets the most attention. The media hopes for the most deaths so they can have days and days of coverage on tragic events and it鈥檚 completely disgusting, it鈥檚 like watching a TV show hoping for real life terror stories to actually happen. These people don鈥檛 want the best of our interests they just want to make more money and have an even more brainwashing influence on our opinions.


The biased process of choosing information blinds us by the actual truth of things and makes us turn a blind eye to the most important events happening around the world. There is no neutrality in the media whatsoever. A world without a media ran by bribing corporations is a world in which brain washing and fallacy no longer take place. We are force fed information that keeps a majority of our opinion in the direction of the mass media鈥檚 opinion. It鈥檚 almost like watching a documentary that is full of lies and propaganda. The intentions and information put out by the media has no benefit to reality, instead it gives us a distorted perception of reality. Without the media we would be able to maintain a logical opinion of a politician running for president by reading first hand records documented by legal officials as well as people that are experiencing these speeches by a certain politician. We would be able to judge for ourselves in a neutral aspect without having biased opinions shoved down our throat along with the benefit of no longer having misguided and made up information.|||Why the Media Must Be Destroyed





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Since the birth of America the media has had a monumental influence on the information that keeps us informed. At the same time, the media itself has also taken the news and created a biased opinion, based upon what they believe to be the truth. The media even goes as far and fabricates the facts and goes as far as lies. The media, chooses to follow and "blow out of praportion" what ever it wants to. In order to sway or convince the people who follow it. The public has become addicted to the fallacy of unnecessary information. Until the media is destroyed we will not be free from knowing the actual truth.





The people in this country have been force fed lies by the media on a daily bases. All because they have a larger following then other media groups. Corporations which advertise and pay billions of dollars annually, contribute and help make up these stories that are built on lies. The media runs by the greed of money and they keep a majority of us to believe there lies as well as the ignorant views of stories that they may cover. Further, they dictate which cadidate becomes president by providing a huge amount of media coverage. While giving the other cadidate very little coverage. Our controlling media, makes up the polls on the approval rating of the cadidates. A good case of this would be sixty five percent approve of Michelle Bachman and zero percent approve of Ron Paul.








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I like the old ways better, no media, and we live in the dark ages. Then no one knows anything except what they are doing in their life! Nice world that would be. What do you think?